Grammar Police!
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Anyone else think this reads a little negatively?
[i]Payments are fast, global, and secure with near zero payment fees. Therefore merchants don’t have to pass on the cost of business to you the customer meaning you are able to [b]enjoy spending less[/b] on the things you love.[/i]
I want to enjoy spending MORE on the things I love! Seriously though, I get the point; but perhaps it should be clarified to “[i]to you the customer, meaning you are able to enjoy the things you love, for less![/i]” or something?
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Agreed, that would read a little better.
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We so need grammarcoin.
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[quote name=“zerodrama” post=“32629” timestamp=“1382978151”]
We so need grammarcoin.
[/quote]I’d mine that!
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People will still buy the things they love but for for less, is how I take it to read. Although now I am surely confused, thanks for the head wreck Tarquin. :D
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[quote name=“UKMark” post=“32631” timestamp=“1382978343”]
People will still buy the things they love but for for less, is how I take it to read. Although now I am surely confused, thanks for the head wreck Tarquin. :D
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This…
It’s saying you would rather buy something you loved… I dunno… hookers, crack, a new TV a few 7990’s etc for £400 than £500.
